Joining with a community of writers in a quick 5 minute write on the topic, “See.”
See
Sea
Seize the day…
they all blend together into one big ocean of seeing
churned by the ocean of knowing
Seized by the tide of thinking
way too much
tossed into currents
that seize the joy
of just being
I’d rather see
I’d rather not know
I’d rather not think
I’d rather just see into worlds beyond my own
into hearts shut
closed
by too much seeing
I’d rather be seen
in this sea
of me
Beautiful analogy.
Thanks Gloria, … with 5 minutes, you kind of slop some ideas together and hope they make sense! Ha.
Beautiful poetry. You have a talent with words.
Thank you… such sweet encouragement.
ahhh yes…the sea and me…and you… all three Always thought full Jane in a good way xoxo your Big Sis, Jeane